Gen and I presented to our partners and got some good feedback. One piece was that when I talk about 288 litres of waste, on screen our audience is seeing a bin with 240 litres. Whilst our message is that it's more than that bin, we could see how it would be confusing.
To respond to this I removed the amount off the bin and overflowed it with green waste:
The girls wanted it even more full so I made the edit for our final pitch presentation.

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